Hello, peaople. After rereading the whole story I had to try a lot not to die of blood loss. My bleeding eyes still hurt like hell.

  I am considering to do a few things with it.

  It's up to you to decide.

  A case of literary theft: this tale is not rightfully on Amazon; if you see it, report the violation.

  Continue as it is: form, plot, characters, a way of speaking and dialogue.

  Drop

  Rewrite: It will take a while but I will try to make it darker, and serious story. For now, it was happy, go lucky overpowered MC PoV who does not understand shit about the world because he is stoned all the time(I judged him like that after reading).

  Anyway, it was fun to write

  it is for you to decide

  I will never give up

  Good luck