home

search

Unauthorized Exit

  Suddenly, I felt something I wasn't sure I'd ever feel here.

  Hope.

  Maybe she can help me.

  Maybe we can still get out.

  “Hey!” I called, my voice cracking as I sprinted towards her.

  "Maddison! Oh my God, Maddison, I never thought I'd-"

  Nothing.

  Her head didn’t turn. Her eyes didn’t focus. She rocked back and forth, slowly, deliberately, like she was in some rhythm I couldn’t touch. My stomach dropped.

  I reached toward her, stupidly hopeful, whispering her name under my breath. My mind screamed that this was impossible. She should respond. She would respond.

  But she didn’t.

  And then I saw it.

  The subtle wrongness of her posture.

  The way her jaw was too slack, hanging open at an unnatural angle.

  The look of her skin. There was a strange, waxy pull to it, stretched unevenly, like it had been fitted over a frame that didn’t belong to her shape.

  And her arms. One of her arms hung lower, like it had been inserted a notch off. So subtly that I could only see now that I was standing directly in front of her.

  It wasn’t her. Not really.

  She was… she was something the station wanted me to see.

  Hope evaporated. The weight of the station pressed in from all sides. I wanted to vomit. I wanted to cry. I forced my feet to move. I couldn’t stay here. I couldn’t confront this… this mockery of familiarity.

  I walked blindly, barely aware of where I was going. My breath came in sharp little bursts. The lights overhead buzzed and then flickered as I passed. The floor seemed to tilt under me, or maybe that was just the panic sitting too close to my ribs. I wiped at my eyes, annoyed at the tears forming again.

  And that’s when I collided with someone.

  A college-aged guy, with red, sunken eyes. He grabbed my arm as I tried to pass, fingers tightening just enough to hold me in place.

  “How long have you been here?” he asked, hurriedly.

  “I just got off the train,” I said, trying to jerk free.

  His eyes filled with pity. And something else. Something hollow.

  “I said that too.”

  He swallowed, staring down at the tile floor. Then he looked up, slowly. “I’ve been here a few days. Maybe more. Time stopped mattering.”

  His voice cracked.

  “Clocks tick backwards sometimes. The same train comes and goes. Loops. Picks up no one. Drops off no one.”

  I took a step back.

  “Don’t listen to the announcements,” he said. His gaze locked on mine. “Except the ones telling you to stay visible. Those are real.”

  “Why?” I managed, voice shaking.

  He shook his head slowly. “Because… there’s… there's something in the dark places here. Heavy. A presence. And if you can’t see yourself clearly, it… it notices.”

  I didn’t want to believe him.

  But the flicker of the fluorescent lights overhead turned irregular, buzzing like something heavy pressed against the wiring. The air felt tight, as though the station itself held its breath. Like it knew we were talking about it. Like it was listening.

  So I didn’t doubt him, either.

  I ran away from him.

  At least, I ran until I noticed that my footsteps echoed in ways that didn’t match my pace. I didn't want to hear them after that.

  I walked until the hallways narrowed and I was in a space I hadn't seen before. The hallway was metallic. Panels of tin screwed into the walls unevenly. Small pieces of the reflective metal shined back at me from down the hall, barely glimmering from the fading light of the hallway behind me.

  I turned and caught a glimpse of myself in the polished steel wall paneling.

  Except it wasn’t exactly me.

  He was standing still when I was still walking.

  His expression was… wrong. Only a little bit. Just slightly too wide at the eyelids. More subtly different than… whatever was wearing Maddison's face.

  I stumbled back.

  Looked again.

  He was gone.

  I was making my way through the rest of the narrow hallway when the PA crackled again.

  “Passengers are reminded:

  Do not attempt to leave the station through Stairwell D, as this is an unauthorized exit."

  A beat of static.

  Her tone shifted slightly. Softer. Almost intimate.

  "And please. Do not approach your own reflection.”

  The words seemed to follow me down the corridor. Sink into the space behind my ears.

  My thoughts scattered.

  Was that… for me?

  I slowed, gripping my own skin hard enough for my fingers to leave small, blood-filled crescent moon indents in my arm. Every beat of my heart felt frantic.

  How could she have known?

  Had she seen what I saw?

  Was something watching from behind the walls? Through… the walls?

  For a second, the hallway tilted, like the entire station exhaled. I pressed a hand to the cold concrete to steady myself. The lights hummed overhead. Too bright. Too aware.

  I wasn’t alone here.

  Not really.

  Not ever.

  That realization settled like cold water in my lungs.

  If you spot this tale on Amazon, know that it has been stolen. Report the violation.

  I blinked, trying to ground myself, but the corridor seemed… different. Angles shifted. Walls rearranged themselves when I wasn’t looking.

  I kept walking anyway.

  At some point, I couldn’t really have said when, the hallway simply wasn’t a hallway anymore. I was standing by the turnstiles, and she was already there.

  Pretty. Early twenties. Wearing a red coat that stood out from the gray concrete like blood on snow.

  “You look lost,” she said warmly.

  Only real warmth I’d felt since arriving.

  “I need to get out,” I said. “I need to go home.”

  She nodded like she understood, truly understood. “There’s a way out."

  Her head tilted.

  "But you have to trust me.”

  Something in her tone was too practiced, too calm. It chilled me.

  “I don’t trust anyone here.”

  She smiled sadly. “No one ever does. That’s why they stay.” A soft sigh escaped from underneath her breath. Thin, practiced, like she'd said this a thousand times before.

  She turned away before I could speak, disappearing down the corridor. As she left, I heard a faint murmur drift back toward me… a sound shaped like words, but not quite clear enough to be. Not quite anything.

  I don't know why I needed to know what she said, but where my feet were once intently planted seconds ago, had suddenly taken me forwards, chasing after her.

  Maybe she was a chance.

  Maybe she was a trap.

  Maybe I didn’t care anymore.

  But the station doesn't obey geometry, and I quickly realized that it was foolish to think that it would. Corners refused to stay where they belonged.

  Corridors folded closed.

  A hallway caved into itself.

  A passage that should have led to a junction became a loop back onto the platform.

  The blank wall shivered. A quiet ripple, like water disturbed by a pebble. I blinked, hoping in all my exhaustion that I'd imagined it. Then the concrete flexed again.

  Lines etched themselves across the surface, hair-thin at first, then widening into deliberate fractures. Cracks spidered outward in frantic, jerking bursts. Sharp angles, jittering lines, impossible geometry that seemed to redraw itself every second I looked. They didn’t spread the way cracks normally do. Not radiating from a center point, but weaving around each other, looping back, creating patterns that almost looked purposeful. Organic. Then a seam split open down the middle, widening as the two halves slowly peeled back. The wall folded with the fluidity of fabric but the sound of tearing metal.

  When the shifting finally stopped, what had once been a dead end now framed a stairwell: impossibly neat, impossibly sudden, impossibly wrong.

  And right where a solid wall had been moments ago, Stairwell D stood right in front of me.

  Dark.

  Silent.

  Waiting.

  And she was nowhere in sight.

  When I stepped toward the stairwell, the lights above me shivered. A contracted, trembling pulse that felt almost like the building flinching.

  The angle of the steps was wrong in a way I couldn’t articulate. Like they were leaning slightly forward, poised to meet me. Inviting me.

  Its edges were sharp, unnatural, yet the steps seemed ready to receive me, as if they had known I would come.

  From above came a sound that didn’t belong anywhere near a human structure.

  A deep, guttural breathing drifted down the stairwell.

  A slow, wavering inhale.

  Like something testing the air, tasting the space between us.

  I backed away.

  The janitor stood at the end of the corridor, mopping the same square he had been when I first stepped onto the platform. He was far away. He was so far away, I couldn't even make out features on his face. Too far away. To hear, I mean.

  So, when a whisper slid across the back of my neck,

  “You don’t belong here,”

  I froze.

  When he turned to look at me, his spine looked first. It shot backward in a rigid, snapping arc, a movement so sudden it looked like someone had yanked an invisible hook buried deep in his vertebrae. His back snapped open in a way no living body should understand, the lower half of him still perfectly upright while the upper half peeled backward, stretching upward as if gravity had forgotten which way to pull him.

  His brittle head followed with a nauseating series of splintering sounds, cracks, twisting from side to side in jagged, failing motions. Each shift came with a wet crunch, like cartilage being mashed into pulp.

  Not turning.

  Adjusting.

  A violent, fractured realignment, like his skull was trying to find the right orientation and failing over and over.

  Like he wasn’t built for movement other than the same repetitive motion he'd been designated since my arrival.

  Like something realigning a piece that doesn't quite fit.

  The angles of him were all wrong, like someone had assembled him incorrectly and was now trying to fix it in real time.

  The motion finally stopped. Not because it returned to normal, but because it simply froze, hanging there for one awful heartbeat too long.

  Then, with no transition, no human shift of weight, he lowered back into his previous position and resumed mopping.

  As if nothing happened.

  I held my breath.

  Afraid that if I exhaled, the sound would snap the scene in half and everything would lunge toward me.

  And then instinct took over.

  I ran away.

  Faster than I've ran before, I ran.

  I ran until I was too tired to run, and then I walked.

  I don’t know how long I wandered.

  Time had started slipping away from me.

  It stretched, warped. Thinned out like the corridors themselves.

  I wandered for what could’ve been hours. Or days. Or something longer. The station didn't care about my sense of direction; every hallway led back into the main platform eventually. Every direction decided to be wrong halfway through. Every turn unmade itself the moment I took it. Shapes repeated. Footsteps echoed behind me that didn’t match mine. Even my own breathing felt borrowed.

  Then the labyrinth shifted, and there it was:

  Stairwell D.

  Again.

  Expectant.

  Waiting for me like it had been there the entire time, but this time different. Changed in a way that felt deliberate. The last time I’d seen it, it had been a mistake. Raw, twitching open from a wall like the station was improvising it on the spot.

  Now it looked settled.

  Composed.

  As if it’d had time to pull itself together before letting me see it again.

  The concrete around the entrance was cleaner, smoother. Polished, almost, with a faint shine that hadn’t been there before. The handrails, once crooked and sagging like softened bones, now stood perfectly straight, gleaming faintly in the dim lights. The steps aligned in a neat, obedient descent, each one identical to the next, like they’d been replaced.

  It was such a striking difference from its previous state, that if it weren't for the sign above, I would've thought it a different staircase entirely.

  STAIRWELL D — EMERGENCY ACCESS ONLY—

  Even the sign looked cleaner, newer, perfectly mounted, with no flicker of wrongness.

  No trembling light.

  No audible breathing.

  Not welcoming.

  Not threatening.

  Just there.

  It was almost… proud of itself.

  I froze. My whole body screamed

  Not this one.

  Not again.

  My feet wouldn’t move. My pulse hammered like it wanted to be anywhere else.

  And then the PA crackled overhead.

  “Attention passengers: Do not attempt to exit using Stairwell D, as it is an Unauthorized Exit. Please remain on the platform.”

  That did something to me.

  Something snapped. Not in a dramatic way, more like a tired muscle giving up. All the fear, all the looping hallways, all the faces staring at walls or whispering the same practiced lines… it all stacked on top of itself until I was too fed up to care.

  I knew they were watching me.

  Maybe they didn’t want me to go up because I could actually leave.

  Maybe that’s why it kept moving. Why it kept showing up in pieces.

  Why nothing in this place stayed where it belonged.

  I took a step toward the stairwell.

  A weird sense of derealization washed over me, like I was watching myself from somewhere deeper inside. My hands felt detached, floating at the ends of my arms. My legs kept walking, smooth and obedient, without consulting the rest of me.

  I paused at the threshold, not entirely convinced I'd stopped on my own will. My breath catching as the world held perfectly, unnervingly still.

  The air flowing out of the stairwell was… clean. Cooler than the stale humidity of the platform. It smelled like outside. Like real concrete and real dust and the faint breath of wind. Not the recycled, metallic air the station used.

  Another announcement crackled overhead—garbled, sharp, almost panicked.

  “All Passengers: Please return to the platform. Please avoid all unauthorized ex-”

  The electricity flickered as I took a step closer.

  "Stairwell D is and unauthorized ex-"

  "Please return to the p-"

  "Do not ent-"

  Static swallowed the rest.

  A dry, bitter laugh escaped me, hollow and sudden.

  “Right,” I muttered, smirk still half wiped across my face.

  I grabbed the rail and pulled myself up the first step.

  Nothing lunged.

  Nothing growled.

  No impossible breathing echoed from above.

  Just… silence.

  Normal silence.

  I climbed.

  Step after step, the staircase stretched upward, solid and unyielding. The concrete was smooth beneath my hands, the handrails cool but steady, grounding me in a reality I hadn’t felt in days… or maybe weeks.

  The steps didn’t shift or twist. The walls didn’t warp or ripple. The lights hummed evenly, without tremor, without the teasing flicker of something alive. For the first time in what felt like forever, nothing here was wrong. It almost hurt to trust it.

  My legs burned a deep ache, like the very marrow of my bones had trembled. My lungs heaved with ragged gasps, not from fear but from the relentless, bone-deep exhaustion of existing in that station. Walking, running, fleeing, wandering without end had hollowed me out. Every corridor, every echo, every impossible reflection had chipped away at me, leaving only raw nerve and stubborn defiance.

  Halfway up, I paused. My hand pressed to the rail, knuckles white. The staircase didn’t respond. It didn’t shift, it didn’t whisper. It just was. That fact alone made me dizzy, made my stomach twist. A part of me expected it to vanish the next time I blinked, to curl back into the wall and trap me in that unending loop again.

  But it didn’t.

  I pushed on. Step after step, until my thighs shook, my arms ached from gripping the railing, and my chest burned as if my ribs had been hollowed out and stuffed with fire. And then, finally, the top.

  I pressed my hands to the doors, feeling the cool metal under my fingertips, the faint vibration of the city on the other side. I drew a deep, shuddering breath and pushed.

  The doors swung open.

Recommended Popular Novels