The first sensation was not light but pressure, a full-body squeeze that crushed him from every direction at once, as if the air had turned solid and tried to occupy the same space as his bones. Then the sound came-no, the lack of sound-everything sucked inward to a point inside his head and detonated out again as a white ring that wasn’t heard so much as felt. His ears rang with a high, pure note that belonged to hospital machines and distant alarms. The light arrived last: a sheet of white that blew through him like wind through a room with all the windows thrown open.
The world snapped back around him.
He stumbled forward a half step, heel skidding on wet stone. Cold bit his calves through thin socks. The smell hit next: damp limestone, something green and old growing where light did not reach, and under it a tang like iron filings on his tongue. His breath clouded and vanished. He blinked hard. Afterimages of that flash burned the shape of his living room window across the dark, then peeled away. He wasn’t home. He wasn’t anywhere he knew.
He had time to think, absurdly: my shoes. He had not worn them. He had been barefoot on the rug. The thought flickered and died as his eyes adjusted.
The room was a square built of slick cobbles, each stone the size of a sheet of A4 paper, each mortared seam black with seepage. Water beaded on them in patient rows, joined, fell in slow ticks to a floor that had been laid in the same rough pattern a lifetime ago. The ceiling squatted low and damp, chains of dark condensation swinging gently in a draft he could not feel, moving like breath. There were no windows. The light-there was light-came from four fat candles set high in iron brackets at the corners, their flames short and smoky, the wicks hissing as if the air itself resented the idea of burning.
He knew he was not alone because the space itself had the taut hush of a church before a service, crowded and waiting. Shadows thickened and thinned as those candles guttered. Nine shapes formed around him, ragged as torn paper at first, then resolving into people. Some stood. Some crouched. One lay on hands and knees, retching dryly.
And there, directly ahead, on a dais of two steps and a slab of better-cut stone-almost a table, almost a stage-was a podium. Behind it stood a figure no taller than a child, but less child and more knife: narrow shoulders under a leather jerkin, a head too large, skin a sickly pistachio laminate under the candle smoke, long ears laid back flat against skull like cats in a thunderstorm. Its eyes were gilded coins catching the candlelight. Its fingers, long and gray at the knuckles, rested lightly on the lip of the podium as if on a familiar lover. It had teeth designed for a purpose Kevin did not want to consider. On either side of the dais, pressed in close enough that their presence pressed the air, towered two shapes that filled the upper corners of the room: ogres, the word supplied itself from a shelf in his brain that usually stored fairy tales and cheap fantasy paperbacks.
They were obscene in their size. The nearest one’s belly strained a leather harness, straps crosshatched over a slab of meat that steamed in the cold. Its breath came slow and wet, a congested engine. It smelled of rancid tallow and old blood hidden in folds. Warted skin glistened with the same condensation as the stones. Its fingers, fat as rolling pins, flexed once around the haft of a club that was not so much a weapon as a solution to problems where bones were involved. The other stood statue-still, head low enough that candle smoke curled along its brow ridges like eyebrows on fire. Chain links hung from both of their belts, not clinking but whispering, as if they too understood where they were.
Kevin realised-too late-that he had been staring. He forced his gaze down, past the podium, to his own feet.
Gray water had wicked up the legs of his socks to mid-calf before he even registered being wet. His toes had already gone numb. The stone under them had that polished, treacherous feel of something worked smooth by centuries of feet and the recent passing of water. A rivulet tracked over the top of his left foot, thin as a blade, and disappeared between cobbles with a sucking sound that raised gooseflesh up his thighs. He curled his toes reflexively, felt grit grind under nails. His breath came shallow, as if the room had been designed to admit only enough air to keep ten human lungs unsatisfied.
He counted the bodies without meaning to, a habit from buses and trains. A woman in a business dress, bare-legged, knees knocked purple by the chill, clutching her handbag to her stomach like a life vest. A boy-no, a young man, eighteen at most-still in a school blazer, hair flattened from headphones now missing, his mouth open as if mid-complaint. A heavy-set guy in paint-splattered work trousers rubbing his forearm where goosebumps were rising as thick as rash. A granddad in slippers and a dressing gown patterned with mallard ducks, blinking as if the room were a bad television channel he could fine-tune if he found the right dial. Three more that resolved into specifics only as movement shook detail loose: a woman in a tracksuit top and pajama shorts; a middle-aged man with a wedding ring and nothing else but boxers shivering so hard his teeth hissed; a waif with tattoos and a shaved head who had already moved her back to a wall, eyes sized for taking in all the corners at once. Someone was crying softly; someone else breathed like a punctured bellows. Including him, ten.
A thought arrowed through the ringing in his ears. He had seen that number before-no, not ten. The numbers. The count. The glowing digits that had swallowed years and then months and finally days. He felt an absurd flare of anger, as if the number should have given him more: a clue, a map, a way to stand here in a room that should not exist with less stupidity in his bones.
His left hand came up to his ear without asking, thumb and forefinger pressing the little cartilage nub to cut the ringing. It changed nothing. The pitch oscillated, a soft warble that made him want to grind his teeth. He swallowed. His tongue tasted metal, his molars chalk. His jaw hinged and unhinged, hunting for a pop that would never come.
Memory arrived sideways, as it often did, not visual but tactile. The stain on his ceiling at home, the damp bloom that had grown island by island until continents formed, and the threadbare rug where his feet had been a breath ago. The kettle that ticked as it cooled. The phone face with the number 1 filling it like a pupil. He had been thinking, ridiculous, about whether to throw the phone off the balcony and watch it shrink like a satellite falling upward. Then the pressure. The ring. Here.
His body tried on panic the way a dog shakes water from its fur: an all-over rough shudder that began in the small muscles below his ribs and snapped out to his fingers. He let it pass through. It left him emptier but able to catalog instead of drown. He knew this trick. He had learned it in the days after his father left, in the hours on hold with angry strangers, in the silent minutes after Jess’s last text, the one without a heart.
Cataloging gave him small certainties. The candles were real fire-he could smell the beeswax and something saltier. The room’s corners were clean ninety-degree jobs, not the bulged nonsense of caves. The podium had been made by hands that understood edges; its oak had gone black where fingers would rest. The figure behind it… he wanted to call it a man, but his brain recoiled. He felt an internal shuffle as his mind made space on the shelf where the word belonged. Goblin, it said finally, cautious, as if naming carried weight here.
He forced himself to look at the others without looking long enough to become responsible for any of them. The woman in the dress had stopped crying, or had stopped making noise doing it-her shoulders still trembled, but her face had set into something that looked like stubbornness wearing a wig of fear. The schoolboy clutched a dead phone as if it were a relic. The tattooed girl ticked her gaze around the room’s edges with ruthless economy, weighing distances to corners, to the dais, to the two heat-radiating problems flanking it. The workman’s hands trembled like he wanted to build a wall here with nothing but wet stone and will.
He looked for Jess without letting himself believe he’d find her. He didn’t. A part of him relaxed and hated itself for doing so. What would he have done if she had been here? He tightened his arms across his chest because they needed to be doing something. His skin prickled as if the room had breathed against him.
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The ogres did not move, and more frightening than their bulk were their eyes. They did not carry the animal confusion he had expected. They were pools of old oil. Whatever they thought-and he knew he was an idiot for that sentence-they kept to themselves. The one on the left had a necklace of something that had once been teeth, polished by fingers. He followed the line of that rope down to the club, to knuckles scarred over, and felt a slippage in his stomach, a shift like a lift starting.
He wanted to speak. He wanted to ask, What is this? But the shape of the room pressed words back down his throat. He pictured asking a question and having one of those huge hands decide that sound was a kind of insult. He pictured how quickly a club moved in close quarters. He pictured his mother’s voice on the answering machine, her last one, the one asking him to come home. He wondered if the countryside had square rooms like this under their roots, if everyone on earth now shared this same damp.
He became aware of the temperature properly. The cold wasn’t sharp; it was insinuating. It slid under clothes, into armpits, along the spine. He knew that if he stood here long enough he would begin to shiver, not from sudden shock but from the slow arithmetic of heat leaving. He rubbed his arms, not because it helped but because it was a promise to his muscles that he still lived inside them.
A drip hit the back of his neck. He flinched. The drop fell from nowhere apparent; the ceiling’s stones held their moisture like secrets. He resisted the impulse to brush it away with a theatrical shudder. He forced stillness. He watched.
Time loosened. It could have been twenty seconds. It could have been five minutes. The ringing in his ears subsided by half, enough to let the room’s sounds in around it: the occluded breath of the ogres, the small whimper of someone trying not to make one, the candle wicks’ spit, the tiny gnat-like ticks of water meeting water in the cracks. He realised then that the podium figure’s hands had not moved at all-not a finger twitch, not a shift of weight. He figured that this stillness was a performance, but for them? Or for someone else's benefit?
He caught himself desiring something from it anyway. A word. A gesture. Instruction. Anything that would tell him what shape the moment wanted from him.
His mind, because it was awful, supplied the word ceremony. Not kidnapping, not attack. Ceremony. The room agreed. It was not messy. It was prepared. They were not the first here.
A tremor traveled through the gathered humans like static under wool as the goblin-there was no other word now-lifted its chin by a degree. The motion revealed the line of a throat thin as a reed and the suggestion of an Adam’s apple that bobbed once, twice. Its eyes made a tiny shift that felt enormous because it was the first motion they had made: not searching, not counting-fixing. On him? He could not tell. He felt seen anyway, in the way small things are seen by birds.
Kevin’s thoughts scattered and reconvened around one embarrassing fact: he wanted this to be about him. It was a narcissism born of terror. If the event was for him, then he was important. If he was important, then there might be rules he could learn, a script he could perform, a way to survive by anticipating his lines.
He felt his chest rise and stall. He made himself exhale. He made himself remember the weight of the kettle in his hand that morning, the way it had clicked on with exactly the same sound it always had. He clung to that sameness like a rope. He arranged his face into something that he hoped read as attentive instead of pleading. He did not know whom he was trying to convince.
The goblin’s fingers left the podium’s edge and pressed, instead, flat to the wood, palms down, as if feeling for a heartbeat. The leather at its shoulders creaked exactly once. Its mouth-thin and lipless in a way that made Kevin think of peeled fruit-softened. The candles tanked on a drafts’ whim and then steadied themselves with effort. Kevin heard his own swallow as if from the next room.
The goblin drew in a measured breath that expanded its narrow chest and made the shadow of its ribs step forward under its jerkin. Its yellow eyes blinked, membranes sliding sideways first, then down. It lifted its chin another fraction, exposing that reed-thin throat to the bad light. It opened its mouth.
“Welcome! Welcome!”
The words tore through the stillness like metal on glass, high and jagged, shaking the last of the silence from the stones. Kevin flinched, his heart stuttering against his ribs as though the goblin had shouted directly inside him.
There was a pause—deliberate and suffocating—as the creature’s mouth pressed shut again. The room seemed to recoil, the silence returning heavier, more expectant than before. Its eyes, black and wet as spilled ink, snapped from face to face with insect precision. Kevin felt them pass across him like a needle of recognition that left his skin crawling.
“Welcome, one and all, to the long-awaited, ever-loved, much-delighted…” The goblin’s grin widened, split too far, the voice pitching into mock celebration. “…the Bal’or Games!”
The title hung in the air, a grotesque parody of festivity, as meaningless and unnerving as laughter at a funeral. No explanation followed. Just the words, bright and hollow, grinding against the thick bewilderment that clamped the humans together like cattle.
The goblin spread its fingers across the podium as though presenting a prize. Its grin remained fixed, though the voice that came from its throat was more piercing than celebratory.
“Yes, yes, the Bal’or Games! Surely you have heard the fanfare, seen the proclamations, read the fine notices! The bells have rung, the banners have flown, the paperwork has been filed on Rigal V for… Let me see…” He paused, his eyes glazing as his focus shifted to something just in-front of him, though there was nothing Kevin could see. “Over three hundred thousand years, no less! And now, at last, you are here. How punctual!”
The words bounced strangely in the chamber, their cheer clipping on stone and falling flat against the water-slick floor. Kevin felt the woman beside him shift, as if she might laugh in disbelief, but the sound caught in her throat.
The goblin carried on as though reciting an old speech it had given a thousand times before.
“You, the fortunate few—well you fortunate three million, one hundred and forty one thousand, five hundred and ninety—have been delivered to this most illustrious event! An event of trials, of quests, of struggles and triumphs!” Its eyes flicked left, then right, as if searching for applause that never came.
“Within these dungeons,” it continued, “you shall embark on adventures both grand and small. You shall find wonders to boggle the mind, magics to unmake what you once thought real, and treasures to tempt even the most modest among you. And, of course…” The grin sharpened to something wolfish. So many teeth, surely more than its mouth could hold, Kevin thought as his mind struggled to keep up with the reality in-front of his eyes, if it was indeed real, of course. “…perils. Many perils. But that is the delight of it all, is it not? For what is triumph without despair!” It chuckled—it was clear that was its favourite part of this whole speech.
Kevin felt a shiver travel the group. No one answered.
The goblin leaned closer over the podium, lowering its voice to a conspiratorial lilt. “Oh, one small formality—death, as you may have guessed, is permanent. Quite permanent. No appeals, no reversals, no refunds. A body broken here remains broken. A spirit lost remains lost. I do hope you won’t take it too hard. Oh, unless of course, you wisely invested in the regulatory insurance offered circa…” Its eyes glazed momentarily again. “Ah, yes!.. 200 years ago.”
It straightened again, brightening its tone as though it had merely announced the lunch break. “Now, now, let us not dwell! You are free to proceed as you wish: alone, together, not at all, it’s entirely your choice from here on out. Of course, bear in mind that competition is, ah, enabled. How do you put it on your world?” It grinned sharply again. “Player versus player?”
Kevin listened to its words, daggering at his eardrums as the high-pitched voice reverberated around the stone floors. It seemed to threaten to cut the cobbled stones all over again.
The goblin tested the phrase like a foreign delicacy. “Yes. Enabled. Entirely at your discretion, of course.”
The ogres shifted then, a slow, rumbling roll of shoulders like mountains reconsidering their weight. Kevin’s throat tightened.
The goblin tapped the podium once with a long gray nail and from nowhere sank through the stone walls were new doorways, one to the north, behind the goblin, one to the west, near the tattooed woman, still with her back to the moving walls, one to the east and another behind them all, the grandest and smoldering with a dark red light, a sulfurous smoke emanating from within.
“And now, we will watch. See what will be done and how you, our players, will play our game!” He sneered, arms stretching out with the coldest of welcomes Kevin had ever endured. “Good luck!” A familiar, yet less potent, flash bolted from the door in-front of the group. The goblin, the two ogre-lackies and the podium all vanished.

