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Episode 4: Club-Hopping To Crime Stopping

  I left writing for a lot of reasons but Im back with a new mentality. I want people to know this: From now on I write for me again and my oc submitters who were and bored and read this to pass the time.

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  Heads up for those that are looking for the craziest descriptions on places are people's outfits I won't go into descriptions unless I feel necessary (ex. Batman's outfit is relatively the same so all you would have to do is watch or look up the wiki's, Wonder Woman and Aquaman are different because of the various outfit changes and all that).

  BMS(Background Music Start)

  BME(Background Music End)

  Theme songs and other songs are below this:

  Opening: Remix Maniacs - "JUSTICE LEAGUE" [Trap Remix!]

  Middle: Dj Kay Slay ft. Vado, Locksmith, Fred The Godson, Mysonne, Jon Connor, Nino Man & Joell Ortiz– Back To The Bars

  Ending: Nas ft. Marsha Ambrosius - If I Ruled The World '09

  INT. DAY

  Meeting room...

  NESS

  (Points to the tv)

  Alright, so Tamaran is home to the Tamaranean, BlackFire. We are to capture due to orders of Okaara. Word has it, she'll be hiding out in a nightclub within the Kingdom. Here's the plan. Rocket, you and me-

  IRON WOMAN

  (Using a mocking tone)

  A little boy? No, I believe Super Woman and I will be a better choice.

  NESS

  (Calm)

  Iron Woman, as your leader-

  IRON WOMAN

  (Starts walking away)

  You think you know best? I don't thinks so.

  Oh the disrespect but once again Ness keeps his cool.

  IRON WOMAN

  (Looks at Super Woman as she leaves)

  Come on, Kara, let's go.

  NESS

  (Looking at Iron Woman as she leaves)

  Wait!

  But before Super Woman can leave...

  NESS

  Ugh... Superwoman, here's a communicator, go help her. And if you find BlackFire, don't fight her, got it.

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Smirks)

  Don't worry, I highly doubt some weak Tamaranian can handle me.

  CUT TO:

  BMS: Remix Maniacs - JUSTICE LEAGUE [Trap Remix!]

  bryf963 Presents…

  Justice League Galactic

  A Fanfiction Written by…

  Fo$t Da Writer

  Original Characters by…

  Fo$T Da Writer

  XxTributomxX

  Red Fiend

  Starring…

  Ness

  Raven

  Zara Larson

  Toji Chan

  Red Fiend

  White Tiger

  Super Woman

  Iron Woman

  Rocket

  Thor

  Static Shock

  Spider-Man

  Ms. Marvel

  Batman Beyond

  Wild Dog

  Also Starring

  Nature Girl

  Wonder Woman

  Batman

  ?

  ?

  ?

  ?

  Justice League Galactic

  BME:

  BACK TO:

  It's a generic nightclub...

  IRON WOMAN

  (Sits at a table with a smirk on her face.)

  See, Kara, we got in easy.

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Sits at the other end of the table with a more serious expression)

  I know, Sara, but remember, if we see her, we don't engage.

  IRON WOMAN

  You're actually listening to that brat? Him beating Thor and me was a fluke. Just like with your cousin.

  SUPER WOMAN

  I know but-

  But before they conversation can continue, a bald Tamaranean man in a black suit and tie outfit shows up...

  NIGHTCLUB OWNER

  (Smiling)

  Hope you ladies are enjoying my night club. My name is Ly and from the moment I saw you at the entrance, I knew I had to have you here. We still only get so many Earthlings around here since we started allowing tourists in.

  IRON WOMAN

  A pleasure, Ly, I am Toni.

  SUPER WOMAN

  I'm Arielle.

  IRON WOMAN

  So, Ly, you own this whole establishment, huh? Impressive.

  LY

  Thank you, I also am known for being an information broker here as well. Which is why, I warn that some here can be hostile towards humans here.

  SUPER WOMAN

  Thanks for the warning, but we can handle ourselves just well.

  IRON WOMAN

  True what my friend said. But we do have money for information, if you accept currency from earth.

  LY

  I do come to my office, we can talk there.

  Let's office...just think like Godfather like shit...

  LY

  Drinks?

  IRON WOMAN

  Business first. We need to know the location of BlackFire.

  LY

  Oh, that's no problem, she frequents here. I'd honestly wish she'd leave. I hear she lives close here.

  BLACKFIRE

  That I do.

  But before Iron Woman can turn around, a syringe is injected into her neck...

  IRON WOMAN

  (Falling asleep)

  Whats....

  But even Super Woman is not quick enough to avoid the syringe...

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Falling asleep)

  Gotta-

  Later, what seems to be a forest behind the club...

  We see BlackFire (New 52 BlackFire ) with a group of male Tamaraneans surrounding Super Woman and Iron Woman who are strapped to two wooden post...

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Waking up)

  Where am I?

  BLACKFIRE

  (Smirks)

  Your new home, of course. See, my boys here never tasted human before. So after I get everything I need from you two, I'll be leaving you in their capable hands.

  Super Woman looks at all the sleazy and perverted looks that the men are giving her...

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Scowling)

  And you think I'm going to let you? I'm going to bring you down.

  Super Woman quickly breaks out of her restraints and flies at BlackFire, for a decently strong punch...

  BLACKFIRE

  (Barely blocks the punch as her hand shakes.)

  Impressive, Super Woman.

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Shocked)

  How?

  BLACKFIRE

  Gotta keep some connections on earth. Now, why don't you show me your real power?

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Highly Annoyed)

  You ask for it.

  The two fly around while constantly colliding with each other, from punches, to kicks, to even energy blast and beams...

  However, Ly on the other hand, pets a still unconscious Iron Woman on the head as he looks at Super Woman, evil smile and all...

  BLACKFIRE

  (Seeing Super Woman scowling at Ly)

  You seem distracted. Don't worry, as long as I don't give the orders, she'll be fine.

  Super Woman unfortunately makes her fatal mistake as she gets shot by a Kryptonite arrow, courtesy of one of BlackFire's men.

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Falling to the ground as she feels weak.)

  How?...

  As Super Woman weakly grabs the arrow but...BlackFire beats her to it and swaps the arrow for a kryptonite necklace.

  BLACKFIRE

  I got my sources.

  Blackfire then carries Superwoman and sits her on to a chair that's next to what seems to be a rock-like table...

  BLACKFIRE

  Men, hold her down.

  The men then do as she says....

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Trying to struggle as the men hold her down)

  Get off me.

  BLACKFIRE

  Ly, hold her arm out.

  With a nod he then brings her arm out and holds the top of her hand down onto the table...

  BLACKFIRE

  Now, who sent you looking for me?

  SUPER WOMAN

  As If I would tell you.

  Just when you think, she can't get more evil, BlackFire starts smiling more sadistically...

  BLACKFIRE

  You know, most people who know me, are quick to give up information. But for dumbasses like you, its unfortunate, I have an "almost fetish" for torture.

  From under the table BlackFire grabs a big sledgehammer,

  That is glowing green...

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Shocked and fearful but hides it with a scowl)

  ......

  BLACKFIRE

  (Sadistically smiling)

  Is that fear I see? Then again, it is a pretty BIG HAMMER!

  A flash of green can be seen from the hammer's force of impact to Super Woman's elbow's opposite side...

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Eyes closed screaming.)

  Aaaaah!

  Tough as she may be, Super Woman cries in pain she's never experienced...

  BLACKFIRE

  Stop crying, it's not broken yet.

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Angry with tears.)

  You evil bitch! I'll make you pay!

  BLACKFIRE

  By locking me up? You know how many prisons I broke out of?

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  A thought then pops into BlackFire's head...

  BLACKFIRE

  (Shocked)

  Wait...you're here to arrest me?

  Super Woman continues scowling at BlackFire...

  BLACKFIRE

  (Smirks)

  Now, you Kryptonian Bitch, who sent you to capture me?

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Serious)

  I won't tell you.

  BLACKFIRE

  No matter, maybe your friend will tell us. All I gotta do is say I got you hostage. But the real truth will be WORST!

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Gets hit with the hammer in the same spot)

  Aaaaaaaaaaah!

  BLACKFIRE

  (Cups Super Woman's chin while looking at her)

  I will kill you, by smashing you with this hammer, nice and slowly until I break every bone in your BODY!

  With that BlackFire laughs before delivering a bone shattering smash with her hammer...

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Crying from the compound fracture in her arm)

  Aaaaaaaaaaah!

  IRON WOMAN

  (Shocked and concerned)

  Super Woman!...My core...

  Wide awake now, Iron Woman can only watch as her friend is tortured...their only hope, is her suit's core thats on the ground next to her...

  BLACKFIRE

  (Smirks at Iron Woman)

  Glad you could wake up. You almost missed the party. But don't worry I got plenty of Kryptonian bones to break.

  LY

  (Letting go of Superwoman's broken arm in amazement)

  Amazing, Mistress, Kryptonians can be broken. I guess the destruction of your planet wasn't a fluke.

  BLACKFIRE

  Soon to be the new ruler of Tamarian, you mean. Wait until they hear that even the Kryptonians are weak against me.

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Angry)

  Don't you dare speak about my race! Aaaaaah!

  This time BlackFire swings the sledgehammer at the side Superwoman's shoulder,

  IRON WOMAN

  (Extremely concerned)

  Super Woman!

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Looking at Iron Woman)

  The mission above all else. Don't tell her.

  At this moment, tears enter into Iron Woman's eyes...

  BLACKFIRE

  Good, cause now we're going to break the shoulder next.

  IRON WOMAN

  (Pleadingly looks at BlackFire)

  No....stop....

  BLACKFIRE

  (Sadistically smiling)

  Hahahahaha.

  And once again...BlackFire unleashes a devastating swing...

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Crying from the broken shoulder)

  Aaaaaaaaaah!

  All Super Woman can see now is see her friend close to crying and a few familiar forms of people...

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Relieved)

  Ugh...

  BLACKFIRE

  (Tilts Super Woman's head up)

  Stay wake, Super Bitch. It's not over yet.

  BlackFire soon is ready to continue her torture...

  ?

  (Finishing walking through the crowd)

  Actually it is.

  Ness, White Tiger and Rocket have arrived...

  SUPER WOMAN

  Ness...

  IRON WOMAN

  (Smiles with hope)

  Everyone...

  The two leaders now size each other up...

  BLACKFIRE

  (Curious)

  Mmmmm...and who would you be, Handsome?

  NESS

  (Smirks)

  God Ness. But most just call me Ness. I believe those 2 belong to us.

  IRON WOMAN

  Now you're in for it.

  BLACKFIRE

  Says the bitch that can't do anything.

  BlackFire flashes some of her aura towards Ness...

  BLACKFIRE

  (Thinking to herself)

  He seems calm. And why didn't he sneak up on me from the start?

  Ness however, surprises everyone...

  NESS

  Actually no. I'm only here to pick up you and Super Babe. Should anyone stop me I'll defend myself.

  IRON WOMAN

  But she's right here! Why-

  NESS

  (Looks at Iron Woman seriously)

  Iron Woman!

  Everyone is left shock by Ness's change in tone...

  NESS

  Look at your teammate, she's bleeding out.

  We are then reminded of the current situation...

  NESS

  Number 2, I told you both not to engage. It's pretty obvious that the sexy Tamaranean here, runs the club. You obviously pressed out for information and got caught. And lastly, we don't have authority to capture her unless approved by the ruler here.

  BlackFire then steps up to Ness, looking up to him, faces barely apart...

  BLACKFIRE

  (Smirks)

  Thank you for the compliment. You're definitely aren't like your friends here. How about we talk some where?

  NESS

  (Smirks back)

  Tempting, but I'm taken.

  BLACKFIRE

  You sure?

  BlackFire then leans further in...

  NESS

  (Puts a finger to her lips)

  Yep. Besides, my girl would kill me, if I messed with her best friend's sister.

  Only a few seconds past...

  BLACKFIRE

  (Shocked)

  Wait...you, and Raven?

  NESS

  Wasn't easy. Now if you excuse me, I'll be leaving, with my teammates.

  Both continue to look into each others eyes, seeing who will lose their composure...

  BLACKFIRE

  (Turns around then walks away with her eyes close, and with a lil sway in her hips)

  Fine, but tell Starfire, I'll be seeing her on the battlefield in 3 days.

  NESS

  (Teammates are getting the ladies and Iron Woman's core)

  You won't. My team will handle you when the time comes.

  BLACKFIRE

  We'll see. I can't wait to take the crown and taking you from Raven will be collateral damage.

  INT. DAY

  Meeting room...

  NATURE GIRL

  (Concerned)

  You think they'll be ok?

  TIGER

  (Concerned as well)

  Yeah, Ness, they've been in the infirmary for a few hours now.

  BARBARA

  (Depressingly sighs)

  Defeat is never easy, trust me on that. It took so much rehab, to be able to walk again.

  NESS

  (Smirks)

  Don't worry, I got it handle.

  ROCKET

  (Smirks with curiosity)

  So what's the plan, Fearless Leader.

  NESS

  First I deal with your squadmates then we go see the ruler of Tamaran.

  Later, in the ship's infirmary...

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Wakes up, sitting up as she pants momentarily)

  Aaaaah!

  She then looks around the room, only to realize she's on a hospital bed, bandaged arm and all...

  NESS

  (Smiles)

  Good, you're awake. Now, someone can talk to me.

  However, both are quiet..so Ness flicks both of their foreheads.

  SUPER WOMAN AND IRON WOMAN

  Oooow!

  NESS

  (Smirks)

  And I'm supposed to be the kid, huh?

  However, this just annoys them...

  IRON WOMAN

  What would you kno-

  NESS

  (Serious)

  About losing? Shit, Super Bae's cuz defeated me before. But I came back stronger and beat him. My life, Iron Woman, has been a war full of wins and losses. My father...killed people important to me, and for almost my whole life. I had to watch him, get medals for that shit. TV's, radios, magazines.

  They can only be in shocked...

  NESS

  (Smirks)

  You loss to BlackFire, so what? Next time, you'll have each others back. And if that doesn't work, believe in me.

  With his peace said...

  NESS

  (Starts walking away from them)

  Now, you two can rest here or come with us to see the ruler.

  BMS: Dj Kay Slay ft. Vado, Locksmith, Fred The Godson, Mysonne, Jon Connor, Nino Man & Joell Ortiz– Back To The Bars

  [Verse 1: Nino Man]

  When a little time go by, they forget what you've done for them

  Always tried to comfort them, now you ready to come for them

  Catch him when he throw out the trash, then really dump on 'em

  He can barely walk through his av', niggas be jumpin' him

  Friends kept pumpin' him 'til they back got the pump in 'em

  Walk by bumpin' 'em, like they voted for Trump and 'em

  Niggas ain't cool 'cause you loyal, they cool 'cause you up

  They will stop doin' shit for you when you losin' bucks

  Can't tell who rootin' for you, confusin' as fuck

  That's why I refused to be toyed with, the Ruger is tucked

  I'm from 30 Lenox

  Got off a half in an hour, imagine thirty minutes

  We can't go half on a sour, you run a dirty business

  'Cause I'm the man with the power

  I'm really sturdy with this, this shit'll hurt the witness

  This the drama hour, free the whole Rikers Island

  They ain't comin' home yet so they on Rikers wildin'

  Kay Slay, this shit ain't for play, play

  Let 'em know we spray K's and spin 'em like bay blades

  BME:

  Later, at the entrance to Tamaran's Rulers throne room...

  GUARD 1

  (Seeing a group of people approaching)

  No one may-

  NESS

  Excuse me guards!

  But Ness walks past him...

  GUARD 1

  (Annoyed)

  Hey!

  As the rest of the team catches up, Ness...

  ?

  (Serious tone)

  What earthling, dares enter my throne room unannounced?

  Everyone is extremely nervous, besides Ness...

  NESS

  (Smirks)

  I do!

  TIGER

  (Shocked)

  Ness, what are you doing?!

  The ruler walks down the steps that descends from the throne and stands in front Ness...

  SUPER WOMAN,ROCKET AND IRON WOMAN

  (Shocked thinking to themselves )

  He's gonna get us killed.

  ?

  (Smiling while hugging Ness in a strong hug)

  Friend Ness. It is great to see you!

  NESS

  (Losing air)

  Same...here...StarFire...too tight!

  Everyone beside the two are lift in shocked...

  STARFIRE

  (Feeling bad)

  Sorry.

  NESS

  (Smirks and puts a hand on her shoulder)

  Its cool.

  Starfire then looks at Ness's team...

  STARFIRE

  (Smirks)

  Still doing the "trolling" I see.

  NESS

  You know me.

  Ness then motions his confused team to come join the two. [Starfire's appearance is her DC Animated Movie Universe design]

  NESS

  Ladies and my bro Rocket, let me introduce you to the ruler of Tamarian, Empress StarFire.

  Everyone then proceeds to bow...except Ness of course...

  SUPER WOMAN AND IRON WOMAN

  (Shocked thinking to themselves)

  StarFire...

  StarFire notices, the looks she's being given.

  STARFIRE

  (Understanding)

  Seems like you've all met my sister.

  NESS

  (Calm)

  Yeah they did. Apparently she'll have a army in 2 days to fight you with.

  STARFIRE

  That would explain your visit here. Otherwise I assume you would of visit when Red Fiend and his team were here.

  NESS

  (Smirks)

  But of course, I had to see my future sis in law.

  ALL EXCEPT NESS AND STARFIRE

  (Shocked thinking to themselves)

  What the hell?!

  STARFIRE

  (Smiling nervously)

  There you go with the jokes. Red Fiend and I-

  NESS

  I just meant you and Raven are like sisters, I wasn't mentioning anything about Rojo. But I approve...once he gets his head out his ass.

  Later in dining hall...

  IRON WOMAN

  (Depressingly sighs as Ness leaves)

  I don't get it.

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Looks at her with a frown)

  Me either.

  TIGER

  (Understanding)

  You mean, how the Empress can be related to someone as sinister and sadistic as BlackFire? How's the arm?

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Smiles)

  Fine since I'm not by the Kryptonite, but Its till not fully healed.

  IRON WOMAN

  I was so useless to help.

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Puts a hand on her shoulders)

  Its not-

  IRON WOMAN

  (Shakes her head)

  No, I was so set to prove myself, I didn't put the team first. That boy, wasn't even mad at me for the disrespect and insubordination. He was mad that we skipped over carefully staking out the place, by asking for information instead.

  TIGER

  (Curious)

  But that does make me wonder, how does he know how to handle situations like this? We found you guys pretty quick, we didn't even interrupt the club. He just went to the bartender and got him to confess that some Ly-guy set you both up. My guess would be, that he's done recon in the past.

  ?

  I see my friend, has chosen a very smart team.

  ALL EXCEPT STARFIRE

  (Shock then quickly bows)

  Empress.

  STARFIRE

  (Smiles)

  Thank you, but bowing will not be necessary. You are considered my guests, as well as Ness. Should you have to, I'll let you know before hand.

  TIGER

  So how do you know Ness, Empress.

  STARFIRE

  We fought together on the same team.

  EVERYONE

  (Shocked)

  What?!

  STARFIRE

  (Sweatdrops smiles)

  Surprising I see.

  She thinks fondly of...good times...

  STARFIRE

  Even then, he was so troubled.

  TIGER

  Does this have to do with him being locked up?

  STARFIRE

  (Smiles)

  It is not my place to tell, but yes. When he joined the Teen Titans, he was allowed to leave prison, thanks to Batman

  Silent fills the room as everyone, excluding StarFire, thinks over what was said...

  STARFIRE

  Look, friend Ness is a good person.

  She can see everyone believes her...Well almost everyone...

  STARFIRE

  (Understanding)

  Super Woman, I am sorry about your cousin. But he's not who he used to be.

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Feeling conflicted)

  I know about...what he tried to do to Raven and your team. And one of the times, I almost helped him.

  STARFIRE

  (Serious as she looks into her eyes)

  Then you know what you must do.

  If Kara is sure of one thing...its, that she's not sure of anything anymore...

  STARFIRE

  (Puts a hand on her shoulders)

  Forgive yourself and fight for your team.

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Shocked)

  Empress...

  STARFIRE

  (Smiles at both of them)

  You, as well Iron Woman. Become the team he knows you can be and be better.

  Meanwhile in StarFire's communications room...

  NESS

  (Looking at her on the monitor smiles)

  You as beautiful as ever.

  RAVEN

  (Annoyed)

  I keep telling you, to stop saying things like that, its out of your character.

  NESS

  (Smirks)

  But I got a hidden smile out of you. How did it go?

  RAVEN

  (Calm)

  Good, now we're going to planet Azarath...to see my mother and aunt.

  NESS

  (Curious)

  Your moms? I thought-

  RAVEN

  (Emotionless)

  She was hidden from Trigon, with the rest of the survivors. I just found out not to long ago from my aunt. She was afraid I'd be sad about my mother not wanting to see me.

  NESS

  Want me to come?

  RAVEN

  (Shocked)

  But your team-

  NESS

  (Smirks)

  Super Babe can handle it. Just gotta get her and Iron Woman back into gear.

  RAVEN

  (Understanding)

  Let me guess, they tried to capture BlackFire and you had to save them?

  NESS

  (Serious)

  Yeah, broke Super Woman's arm too. They looked defeated, but I believe in them.

  RAVEN

  As you should.

  As they look into each other's eyes for a few seconds...

  RAVEN

  (Serious)

  You flirted with BlackFire, didn't you?

  NESS

  (Smirks)

  More like, the other way around. She wants to take me from you now.

  RAVEN

  (Understanding yet keeps her usual emotionless face)

  I believe that. I mean, you do have your uses.

  NESS

  You know, you could just say you love me.

  RAVEN

  (Closing her eyes for a second then looks at Ness)

  I could but....I won't.

  NESS

  (Door opens behind him)

  But-

  RAVEN

  Hey, Star. Make sure he doesn't get into too much trouble.

  With that Raven hangs up...

  NESS

  (Mumbling while StarFire giggles)

  I get no love here.

  Later in the StarFire's communications room...

  TIGER

  (Curious but excited)

  So what's the plan, Ness?

  NESS

  (Smirks)

  Simple, Tiger, we're going to storm the nightclub. Barbara.

  BARBARA

  (Opens the schematics to the club on the table)

  Seems like the nightclub has a shortcut to the battlefield. Empress StarFire has pinpointed to us.

  NESS

  Super Woman and Iron Woman will be with me to take on BlackFire. I will be providing you two with backup. I figure it's your get back.

  SUPER WOMAN AND IRON WOMAN

  (Serious)

  Bring it.

  NESS

  Rocket and Tiger provide a distraction, no restrictions. Nature Girl, you and Barbara will be providing us Intel, but it will be your main job to protect Starfire from assassins. Ready?

  EVERYONE

  Yes.

  INT. DAY

  As Rocket gets his laser Rifle, White Tiger gets ready with some warm up stretches...

  ROCKET

  (Talking on earpiece)

  Uh, you sure about this, Kid?

  NESS

  (On earpiece)

  Yep.

  Rocket then obliterates the club's entrance while White Tiger throws sleep grenades around the inside of the club, effectively knocking out the soldiers for easy restraining...

  ROCKET

  (Smirks)

  Now that's how you make an entrance.

  Around the same time...Ness, Super Woman and Iron Woman make it to the shortcut's entrance. Its sits on a plain of grassy and rocky land...

  NESS

  (Walking up to the door while talking to Rocket)

  Oh yeah, I got you one better.

  ROCKET

  Bullshit, Kid, that's Tamaranean Metal.

  Ness build up energy as his arm is covered in hot magma...

  NESS

  (Cock backs his fist as the magma heats up.)

  VuLCAN'S

  The women are shocked by how much energy Ness is generating as rocks start moving away from him...

  NESS

  (Punches the door)

  PUUUUNCH!

  As if overcutting a huge weld, Ness's punch vertical travels up and down as the door cuts open.

  ALL EXCEPT NESS

  (Shocked)

  ......

  NESS

  (Bows with his arm out in a ladies first gesture)

  Ladies.

  SUPER WOMAN AND IRON WOMAN

  (Rolls their eyes but the get serious)

  Right.

  After a few long hallways, we are in what seems to be a factory...

  BLACKFIRE

  (Angry as her eyes glow purple)

  What's going on?!

  NESS

  (Leaning on the wall of the factory's entrance with a smirk.)

  BlackFire...sup?

  BLACKFIRE

  (Smirking)

  Oh, so you've come back to me much earlier. Oh and you brought these two back. Didn't you both learn your lesson.

  Neither heroine show fear as they walk up to BlackFire...

  IRON WOMAN

  (Serious)

  You had to drug us last time, this time we're ready.

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Serious)

  Stay back, Iron Woman. From orders of Okaara, you're under arrest, BlackFire.

  ?

  I don't think so.

  BLACKFIRE

  Allow me to introduce you to my brother... WildFire.

  (WildFire appearance is Ryand'r is from his Prime Earth)

  But instead of nervous or fear...

  NESS

  (Amped up.)

  Oh bet, I get to actually fight. Y'all ladies enjoy your squabble. The Men need to get acquainted.

  WILDFIRE

  (Shocked in anger)

  You think you can beat me?

  NESS

  (Smirks)

  I think you won't even get a scratch, Softfire.

  WILDFIRE

  That's it!

  As WildFire flies at fast speed...

  Ness...is having no difficulty dodging, which angers his opponent.

  Meanwhile, BlackFire is struggling against Super Woman. She's matched BlackFire in speed, strength, and technique. Even firing blackbolt projectiles have proven fruitless to the now faster Woman of Steel. Before BlackFire can sneak behind Kara, a red beam of light hits her from Super Woman's eyes...

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Walking to the crater sent BlackFire too)

  You're finished. I guess you was the weak one.

  BLACKFIRE

  (Holding a small chunk of kryptonite)

  Ugh...I don't think so.

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Stops as her body weakens)

  No....

  Around this same time...

  WILDFIRE

  (Still missing punches and kicks)

  Looks like it's over for your friends. And soon for you as well.

  Right when Ness looks at Super Woman...he side steps a starbolt...

  NESS

  (Smirks)

  Not everything is how it seems.

  We now go back to a "triumphant" BlackFire...

  BLACKFIRE

  (Sadistically smiling)

  Any last words.

  SUPER WOMAN

  You're arrogance was your undoing.

  BLACKFIRE

  (Shot by Iron Woman's)

  Huh-aaaaaaah!

  Unfortunately for BlackFire, she got too into her fight with Super Woman and...

  WILDFIRE

  (Sees his sister defeated)

  Sister!-huh?

  NESS

  (Initiates a high spinning kick covered)

  Vulcan Kick!

  All can be seen on your screen is an extremely burnt face and barely unconscious WildFire hitting the ground...

  NESS

  (Smirks as they restrain their opponents)

  Proud of you two.

  SUPER WOMAN AND IRON WOMAN

  (Smirk back)

  Thanks.

  INT. DAY

  Later in the ship...

  NESS

  (Smiles)

  Ladies.

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Feeling bad)

  We're sorry.

  IRON WOMAN

  (Feeling bad)

  You been doing your best to lead us, and all we been doing is being a burden.

  SUPER WOMAN

  If it wasn't for you, we be dead or worst.

  IRON WOMAN

  Sorry for all the disrespect, Leader.

  Instead of being mad, Ness is chilled as always...

  NESS

  It's cool. I'm just glad now we can really get to training. By the time I'm done with all of you, you'll be legends.

  BLACKFIRE

  (Annoyed in her cell)

  Do you have to make up here?

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Smirks)

  We thought you two would enjoy the entertainment.

  WILDFIRE

  (Angry)

  Just you wait, Ness-

  NESS

  (Uses aura against WildFire)

  Let me stop you there. I'll kill you if you try to kill my love ones. I'm not the greatest with the not killing thing, get me.

  While WildFire shits on himself...

  BLACKFIRE

  (Shocked)

  What are you?

  NESS

  (Smirks)

  Taken.

  Later in the meeting room...

  NESS

  (Smiles)

  Team, I'll be gone for a few days so until then, Super Woman is in charge. For now, you're off for a few days. Enjoy Tamaran.

  TIGER

  (Curious)

  Ness, wait.

  NESS

  (Curious)

  Yes, Ava?

  TIGER

  That recon mission...you done this a lot.

  NESS

  That's because I been killing villains since the age of 4. Red Fiend and me were the killers, and Toji was the one to find our targets.

  Ness can tell they want more than that...

  NESS

  (Serious)

  Rocket can tell you. It's not a path you want to go down. Even villains have families and love ones. It wasn't black and white. And had I not learned. I wouldn't be here today.

  Everyone is shocked but only one person speaks the group's thoughts...

  BMS: Nas ft. Marsha Ambrosius - If I Ruled The World '09

  IRON WOMAN

  (Shocked)

  Wow, to think you can be serious.

  SUPER WOMAN

  (Smirks)

  Just means we have to do the same.

  EVERYONE

  (Smirks while look at each other as Ness watches them)

  Right!

  Justice League Galactic

  A Fanfiction Written by…

  Fo$t Da Writer

  OC's

  Fo$T Da Writer

  Ness

  Toji Chan

  XxTributomxX

  Zara Larson

  Red Fiend

  Red Fiend

  Justice League Galactic

  END

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